Youth on Fire

Story build up is good (a little wordy in the beginning). great potential in the story like!

Well, interesting start and intriguing plot but you just made me give my pet a look that said “you are not going to turn on me, are you?"😁😁Great work author, I love the story pacing and the scene setting  too I can definitely see a lot of potentials so I'm wishing good luck.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

And we could all use a little change

5 months ago.... 😭

In the television of cafeteria,a popular musical program was telecasting. Although they didn't pay much attention, they could hear it in the background.

Magic: None

So Elizabeth SLOWLY went to the shower and washed her hair, then body. After that she would got to her bedroom, apply lotion the  her beauty products like powder and I forgot to tell she 100% hates make-up but she doesn't protest if she needs to wear make-up on projects she just really tries to avoid it.She would wear ger clothes then her service would exactly be there. Yes she will probably not eat her breakfast andgo to school hungry. When she got to school.